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"Bubble still gives me a little trouble." I thought it was a good rhyme! : )
I see what your saying. It's much easier for me to change the bubble concept than it would be to change the unnatural bracelets line. To me, describing the slashing of the wrists as bracelets is the most original and entertaining concept within the lyric. I will re-evaluate the following line and try to keep my baby in tact. I was just thinking, "My blood drips into the shadows." Let me know what you think of that and how it fits into the sequence. I still think you are correct on needing to tighten up that line by changing to either "form" or "are born."
Thanks a ton! You're awesome.
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Last edited by swtke; 06/25/09 06:55 PM.
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