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Well, you don't want to mess up your melody. You could go with the born from but change the next line so that they flow together to indicate the idea that the blood born from sin drips blood into the bubble. Unnatural bracelets born from my sin, v2 drip my blood, into my bubble, Don't know how it would sing with the melody though, since I can't hear it. Bubble still gives me a little trouble. (Pardon the rhyme.) Bubbling doesn't sound comical to me, but bubble does. I get the idea of the bubble -but it is kind of a comical image and sounds comical as well. It could be just me.  Is the person in a bathtub or water of some kind?
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