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Yes...that sounds clearer to me Heather...

I'm not sure what I'm suggesting is right...It just sounded more kid like to me....
to...do this..

Danny dropped his dum dum on the playground
picked it up and took a look around
the other kids were busy playing duck duck goose
so he did what any other little boy would do

He wiped it right back off and stuck it in his cheek
then he heard " eww your gross" coming from a tree
busted by Emma Lee the cutest girl in school (that's good)
(but) she just smiled and said" na, its cool "
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Chorus...



Danny..
the Bible says we must be spotless and pure
but it's not talking about our exterior
why ,you could stand before God covered in mud
just as long as you're washed in the blood !

and or if you can get 4 more lines...that would stick closer
to the dirt on the outside theme....if you need them.

But with the line lengths...and such...you may be able to make it work with...the half verse.

just how I was seeing gal......

Hugs to you......
Kaley