Nicely-Penned Mz WenD!

Ya might try a SPOKEN Last Line before the Hook, V3:
(& yeah, it doesn't scan exactly..but it's a Kicker:)

"But that little forked-tongue's a giveaway.."
Like the last 999,000 times--

"KUDOS" & K-O-S, M'LadyChum!
Big Hugs,
Stan