Hi Sub:)

Thanks for thought process on all this.
I'm not that familiar with the genre, so this is good to know!
Thanks for clearing up the "retro" sound for us.
I don't play an instrument or listen to "retro" songs enough to know that it was intentional.

I can appreciate how hard you work in the studio, your passion about your music should be obvious to all who hear it.
There are many things I like about your song, in-fact the lines
"Sinking low Sinking low" have been playing in my head through-out the day:)

I guess because I listen to so many songs that resolve or have more details in them, I tend to look for those things in other songs.

I am actually trying to write more songs that are less detailed and more open to the listeners interpretation.
What I have noticed lately is a lot of Pop songs are leaning more this way.(maybe they always have)lol

I hope I haven't made the impression that songs geared only for the "Market" are worthwhile,that's not my intent.
although I do believe people who write commercial songs are just as passionate about their songs and their craft.


This is a valuable learning tool!
I will keep all this in mind for future critiques.