Hi Heather, like Beth said, we all forget what a talented writer you are because your such a gifted vocalist. Love the song especially the hook. I agree with many comments about v-2 even tho you could deliver a meatloat to a vegetarian and they'd eat it. You've painted a nice picture here and it's pretty easy to read between the lines. Here's my 2 cents worth on how to add closer to v-2 but it's only a sugg...great work

But I know if I would only wear his ring...
I'd never have to want for anything..
But my memories of the way things used to be..
Only re-inforce the fact..that he's just a memory...

You've already made up my heart..

Pete