Hi Heather-
Guess i'll repeat a lot of what's already said, like ... you have a lovely voice!! ... great hook!! ....nice tune!!
I don't have to deal with the SOL issue anymore, so i'll skip that grin and I must admit songu put into words what I was thinking but could not explain about verse 2 .. yes... it seems too 'light-hearted' compared to the rest of the song.
This is a wonderful song .. almost done! Gonna be a winner!
All the best!
Joanne