Hi Heather,

As usual another great vocal. I think the hook was clever by working the traditional phrase of "make up my mind" and switching it to "make up my heart". Very good idea there. To be honest I never heard the term "SOL" (which means I can't be alone) and when I read the song in print I thought it was going to be faster and sung in a different light but w/the softness of the vocal and a more mellow melody I don't believe "SOL" fits in. In all candor I don't care for curse words in a song or even an acronoym representing a curse word, and I think this is too soft to include it. I tried to think of another line there that would end with a rhyme to rhyme with "sale" in the line before and one I thought of was:

Well that sounds good but my loves not for sale,
It won't be long before he finds out..

The "out" if you sing it in your normal style will sound like a soft rhyme w/sale, (I tried it). Just an idea for you if the "SOL" is a weak spot.

Nice one Heather. smile

Best,
Lynn

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