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Ali Angel
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/27/26 11:00 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hi Heather,
No argument here about your singing. You made it sound so easy and very natural. The title and chorus were unique and kept my attention. As for the SOL, I knew what it meant, it surprised me, which isn't always a bad thing, then I got over it. To me, it's just one more thing to set it apart from all the other songs.
If I had to pick a nit, I would say that I would like to see a little more imagery in the verses. You have a couple good lines but more would make it more interesting and as fresh as the chorus.
I don't know how much time you have spent on it, but I think a little more will give you a solid keeper.
Ricki
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