Hey Heather,

Very nice overall and you can certainly sing........good hook as mentioned.

Along with the SOL, I don't particularly like bad English even though it's a country song and it's common.

"but there ain’t left nothing to decide" could be
"but there's nothing left to decide" which fits just as well.

SOL sounds very slangy. Maybe that's what you want for your target audience.

Just saying........!




Last edited by Colin Ward; 07/16/08 09:46 PM.

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