Hi Wendy,

I like this one a lot. There are tons of great images in here. That said, I think you could tighten it up a good bit, lose a word, or a syllable here and there, and add a cha-cha or Carribean feel to it, and make it even better. Good luck with it.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
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