Hi Wendy

Love the whole concept of envisioning what all theses characters are doing now. Very innovative and makes my mind take my Own journey. Yes, thank your muse!

As far as your singing and guitar treatment it all works very nicely to me.... If you want to explore some thing different the one line in your chorus

And Captain ........Hook
Stands alone on his pirate ship you stay on one note for all of this....... some bit of quaver variation might be nice.... you can still stay on the same chord that you have......

Nice job for a quick inspiration. smile jm


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