This one brand new. I just wrote this a few days ago. I think the tune could use some tweaking. Any thoughts on it would be appreciated. Nothin' too fancy though because I'm not a guitarist or musician.

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Never Land
Wendy DuMond
(c) April, 2008

Peter Pan is pushing 60
And Wendy’s a soccer mom
The Lost Boys have all been found
Except the one who’s gone all wrong

Tinker Bell’s clerking the token booth
Out on the Jersey Turnpike
It was the only job that met the qualifications
Of a geriatric wood sprite

(Chorus)
And Captain Hook
Stands alone on the deck
Of his ship run aground on the sand
The kids are playin’ video games
And no one comes to Never Land

Tiger Lilly’s workin’ as a cashier
At the Cherokee casino
She’s been workin’ there since the
Mermaid’s Lagoon
Got flooded by El Nino

Mr. Smee went away to NYU
And got himself a graduate degree
And Starkey works a corner
vending cart
selling hot dogs and iced tea

(Chorus)
And Captain Hook
Stands alone on his pirate ship
Just missing his hand
Nothing's been the same
Since the croc went away
Around here in Never Land

John's the pilot of a big jet plane,
flyin' the friendly skies
Michael has a job filling inventory
delivering office supplies

Peter's shadow is floating away
Bouncing through time and space
But Peter doesn't even miss him
And the shadow doesn’t know his face

(Chorus)
And Captain Hook's
Still on his pirate ship
Shouting out commands
But there's no one to hear
but the moon and the stars
That surround Never Land

Tag/Chorus
And Captain Hook
Stands alone on his pirate ship
Just missing his hand
Nothing's been the same
Since the croc went away
Around here in Never Land



Last edited by Wendy D; 04/25/08 01:52 AM.
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