Kristi,

Thanks for the crit. I think everything you stumbled on can be cleared up by reading my reply to Ben. That way I'm not boring everyone by retyping the same thing...lol.

However, with what you said I have come to realize that I definitely have to clarify this story more. In the event it ever made it to the airwaves...there won't be anyone to explain it before it's heard. smile

Thanks again!

Bree


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