Hey Calvin!

Good to see you too. smile
So glad ya stopped by.

Good point on that line. Maybe I need to change that to
"you said they hurt you"

I'll mull that one over when I get a solid melody going (right now it's in the liquid stages)...it'll be easier to flesh out then I think.

So far I'm surprised at the lines people like & the ones they seem to stumble on. The ones others have issues with are not the ones that I had issues with. hmmm....

Thanks again for stoppin' by...always nice to hear from ya.

smile
Bree


The ideal poet has a genius for making the things we see every day seem new. ~ Samuel Johnson

I write because I breathe, I breathe because I write. ~ Me

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