Hi Bree,

Good to see you & good to see you writing.
Lots of nice suggestions already but here's one more question...

I finally lost count
of the number of days
since I saw you
yea, since I saw you
Still remember how it felt
and the words you wouldn’t say
you refused to
said they hurt you

Shouldn't it be saying....

I finally lost count
of the number of days
since I saw you
yea, since I saw you
Still remember how it felt
and the words you wouldn’t say
you refused to
(SAY) they hurt you

ps........

I like this part....

Neither one of us could say it
Maybe we were just afraid it

Good luck.


Calvin


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