Hi Again Mark

Ah so glad that you put that link up......Nice voice if that't you! I think the arrangement is very nice and I like what you have going for guitar rythum. Lots to like about the song. It works for me on many levels....I do also like the background vocals mostly, but there is something there that needs fixing or looking at if you do an updated version...It may be just one or two notes adjusted even...I'll try to come back and listen again, but it brings down the pleasant quality in your chorus, so it's worth tweaking.

Anyway, so glad you are posting here.

jm smile

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