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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Hi Lyle
While i agree with the others on liking this song... i like it because the basic idea has already been done.
I am not exactly sure how this is sposed to sound so I'll give it a listen when I get home.
Though what I did notice while reading it is it is very close in meter an general build to a first edition song (Kenny Rogers was in first edition) called "Ruby Don't Take Your Love To Town) And considering you william character is being told not to go downtown it makes it even more plagaristic.
That said I am not saying it's bad just not original. I did however like the story just needs a more original setup.
Derek
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