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Nice to meet you. Nice hook. See if any of these changes help.
1st verse Well I waited in line for forty hours for this show Starring George Strait, Alan Jackson and others I don’t know I really only came here to hear King George sing And To DRINK away the PAIN (STING?) OF my old flame
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REMOVE - GIVES AWAY THE PUNCHLINE TOO EARLY: (And I’m gonna keep on drinkin’ Till I can’t see Strait)
I can hear him singing at this live concert And boy does he sound great I’ll keep chasing away those memories Of the girl I used to date And I’m gonna keep on drinkin’ Till I can’t see Strait
2nd Verse Well HIS music (REMOVE:I GUESS)I could ALWAYS hear on the radio I didn’t have to pay top dollar not to see this show But to hear George singing (REMOVE:live) “fool hearted memory” It warms a special place deep inside of me
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Well out of the “Blue Clear Sky” Her memories KEEP coming back So I’ll just chase it AWAY with A bottle of JOHNNY BLACK
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~Wolvman~
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