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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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I do truly appreaciate you honesty on this one I feel like the whole song smacks of comedy but then I also laugh at my own jokes. Any rate was just wondering if you Dog or anyone else could help me tighten this baby up a bit so it really soars I really like the Hook and I am not loosing that part but the rest I am open to change if some one can come up with a better way to make the hook work. I figure seeing Strait requires "Seeing Him" now this could be at home on the tv I spose but a Live venue sounded better any rate I am open to changing just need some scope as to what it needs thanks all I'll keep writing till I write a hit or till my fingers fall off lol
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