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Hey Jeremy: I like the lyric for this - and jailface is a wonderfully descriptive word. You should pretend it was your first choice all along  Melody worked pretty well for me too. Performance wasn't quite there for me though. I know you said the mix was rough... Agree with Kevin that the answering voice is too loud. Also think that drum beat isn't working. Kevin said that the song had a dreamy quality which might not fit the lyric. I agree somewhat. In my opinion, the problem isn't with the melody but in the arrangement. First thing I think is to get a better drum beat - one more rock-oriented. And then the vocals made a little more edgy and the main vocal brought up in the mix. And then see what's needed after that  All just one opinion from an average Joe. Think this could be pretty cool.... Scott
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