I think there is about 10 seconds of dead space in the beginning, probably should remove that. The second vocal seems too loud compared the the main voice. You have a "dreamy" quality to the song, which I am not sure fits the lyrics. Seems like the song has promise, but it is not doing it for me in the current state.


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