Bobbie, I've gotta ask...do you see this as something that could be cut? I ask this because elements of it(the 2nd vs) are real close to Jesus Take the Wheel. as well as because some of the lines don't make any sense.

in the first vs "dropped a wheel off the pavement" comes out of nowhere with no previous mention of her driving. plus it's an awkwardly worded phrase. veered off the road...maybe. and you don't get t-boned by wheels...you get the front end unless it rolls right over you and that's not being t-boned.

it might be good to review Jesus Take the Wheel because so much is covered there but with this it takes two and half vss and a bridge to say "I was saved and don't know why".



Last edited by couchgrouch; 03/23/07 03:40 PM.
Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love