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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2006
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Hi Bobbie,
I've heard stories like this and they are truly miracles. I like how you took this story and were able to fit it all in a lyric. The only spot I find alittle rough is "dropped a wheel off the pavement". Up here we call the sidewalk the pavement, so if she's on the highway she wouldn't be on the pavement. Could you say "fell asleep at the wheel" or something else there? Didn't know if for last line of chorus you should change to "so often when we pray" since miracles do happen when we pray but not every time unfortunately. Good write and good story.
Best,
Lynn
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