Good Sunday Mornin' HiDee Mz Trish!

A Good Warnin'Ya Gal kinda Song here...Fine Hook!

I think "OR say things you don't really mean" WOULD "Keep it Simple"...(feels like One Too Many "Dont's" in that line.)

Maybe "Don't treat me like I'm STILL sixteen" & "That well runs a bit too deep"...

Chorus comes off as maybe TOO simple. (But that's cuz I'm a Guy...)

OK, it got More & More Profound with Every Reading. "KUDOS"..it's a Gem!

Next Verse, Lines could be Simpled-Up some again, JMO.
"Then go back & call us 'friends'"
"I don't forgive; I don't forget" I DO recommend...(K-O-S) alla My Recommendations...La Femme allus does~!


"Where your bounbdaries start or end"

"Your" kinda confuses, so I'd say "THIS fear of falling"

Sorry these line sugs are outta order...La Femme's Computer's givin me jitters again. DO have a new Laptop I'm tryin' to Master..real soon..thanks to Best Buy's latest Sale!

Good Luck with this Good'n'!
Big Hugs,
Stan