Hi Tricia,

I think you may be on to something here. If you've been listening the blues channel as you said this may be why you came up w/this. It can go very bluesy if you take it that direction.
Either way I felt the chorus was alittle shy of information. I think your trying to tell the guy "let me know here" and the chorus doesn't spell it out as well as it could so here's an a possible idea:


Just keep it simple,
Give it to me straight,
If it's love, it's love,
(And)If it ain't it ain't.

Possible bridge:

My heart can't handle free falls,
So baby (darling) just be blunt,
I'm lookin here for honesty,
I want it all upfront.

I'd change the "sip from the well" line also and shorten boundaries line as Joice and Stanrecommended.

Just some ideas here Trisha. Good luck.

Best,
Lynn


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