I like, and I can certainly relate. If there's a weak spot, it's that the chorus seems a little long... after v1, I was ready for v2 almost immediately, this is a story song and they generally have short choruses, a refrain line, or just a bridge... so that's why this chorus is a bit long, IMO. Other'n that, this is a gem. When I was a kid, we had a tornado that sucked the attic door into the attic, stuck leaves to the inside of our window screens (that's back when they said to open the windows during a tornado), and blew our cargo carrier 2 miles away but didn't put a scratch on it.

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[This message has been edited by Corey (edited 05-11-2004).]