Yeah nothing like the power of a tornado... kinda like an inverted drain sucking up into the sky rather than down the toilet...

Loved this couplet..

Sucked all the water out the creek
to wash down a herd of yearling beef


And I experienced one of Canada's rare tornadoes when it took out swaths of trees and part of a sub division in Woodstock Ontario back in the late seventees. Awesome destructive power out of a sickeningly green sky...


Well written as always.


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop