Hi TT, Thank you very Much for taking a look at this....and for taking my kid songs seriously...appreciate that!........

Think your...It's Not a Day TO stay in Bed...
sings better than what I have....(for that verse...)...but if I do that....than I'll need to go down...and change something...in
corresponding line...in 2nd verse..... In more involved songs...I'm not quite as picky about matching up...note to exact note between the verses.....
but this one...I plan to submit...for piano
sheet music...and children's song books..and think I'll have a much better chance of having it accepted if I have it matched up exactly...so can be played the same way for both verses... If you feel......this works...i could use not.....and still keep the same......?

Out the door, grab a sled
Not a day to stay in bed...

holler back....as I know you also write music.......and I could be confused.

Am thinking...on getting snowy in there...
If I stress differently....it could work.

Thanks again very much for your time and thoughts.

best wishes,
Kaley [Linked Image]