Hi Calvin....

hoping Calle is doing well!!!.....thanks for looking at this....and offering your thoughts on the three questions...I too..like
corn cob...because of the way it sounds...but
the carrots [Linked Image] have made a valid point. Both
sing well.......with corn cob slightly smoother.........

hmmmm on the until...... It just may...but
I'm really trying to keep it as close to the
first verse as possible.....and it would mean
adding an additional note...which I'm not
opposed to..........but I'd like to keep it
as close as possible....and to my ears, that line sings nicely with till.

Thanks so much for taking the time...to look closely at the lines.....and think about them....and offer suggestions! appreciate it.

best wishes,
Kaley [Linked Image]