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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jul 2001
Posts: 4,178
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Hi Blake!!!!! It's so good to see your name here again!! I've got my own catching up to do, but thought I'd take this spare minute to comment on this fine lyric. Interesting rhyme scheme, it took me a while, but I got into the "groove"... Have a couple of suggestions. For the last line of the chorus, if it were me, I'd just say: IT'S A Red River Romance (that's how it sang itself to me, anyway.) In the Second verse, the last line seems to need a little more something Can’t take much more travel The tires are bald And damn near unraveled But I'LL DO WHATEVER I HAVE TO DO, (cause) This is a nice lil lyric, Blake, love the story, it's timeless... ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/wink.gif) Tink
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