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Mighty fine job, Bobbie. Boy, first Graham's lyric, and now this one-- two solid blues songs in one day. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) Just a couple nits-- "An' I got them..." is kind of a weak way to keep getting to the hook. You wanna substitute a "Deep in the..." or something else a few times for variety's sake. And strictly speaking, that should probably be "Didn't (or couldn't) get to work on time..." in that one line, but no biggie. Great job overall. I liked the "Detroit City" line the best, hometown pride notwithstanding. Anthony ------------------ Anthony's BeSonic site-- Open 24 hours!
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