Hi Kaley,

Came back to this via your comment.

Yes that is what I meant. You can go aababab
and if you think its too short, add a bridge so that the structure is aabab(bridge)ab or somthing like that.

I know what you mean about rewrites. My problem is that I am a very spontaneous writer and if I actually have to work for it, writing loses its luster for me.

Good luck with this!
John


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop