boy, John...thanks for taking such a serious
look at it...come to think about it I know
what pictures/and little nic nacs you're talking about.

so you're saying maybe incorporate a bit
more plot in first and build up more in
2nd.....I maybe writing you for help on that.
But as such...I have enough verses?

I have a serious block with re-writes
I hope I can start getting past that.

...thanks for taking the time... [Linked Image]

Kaley