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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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PETE
by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Donna,
Really enjoyed the lyric; very descriptive and flowed great. My only comment would be that your chorus has the same rhyme scheme as all your verses which when put to music might be a bit dull if they all sound alike. IMHO if you changed the rhyme scheme of the chorus you'd make it easier for whoever puts music to it to change up the music. Otherwise, i thoroughly enjoyed this!
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