Kris,
Your right,No doubt, we expect an honest critique when we post a lyric in these forums. My point is that this writer did not post this lyric and ask for critique. The lyric was posted by someone other than the writer and this other writer bagan to bash the lyric. My skin is pretty thick and i've been told more than once that a song stinks, that dosnt bother me. But please dont take a lyric of mine and without my permission, post it and degrade it. This is not a critique. It is a bashing!! It is the most un-ethical thing I have ever seen on JPF.
Lets look at the big picture here.

With all respect

Robert Gann


Robert