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Goldroom
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/08/26 01:40 PM
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SOMA
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/07/26 11:11 PM
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Joined: Jan 2006
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Hi, Cal -
The placement of the title/hook stopped me dead in my tracks the first four or five times I read it because there were several possibilities for interpretation. If you choose to leave it where it is, make certain you lead into it with a verse strong enough to eliminate the ambiguity.
I'd love to see the finished draft when you get it done. cue
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