Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Means being consumed by it. And it is a bitt going for style points. But its interesting.

If you dont think so, that's fine..

I dont think im great either

But your examples/images are pathetically bad.

Friends won't ever tell you that, they literally dont know.

But they know when a dong captures their interest.

Im honestly trying to help you along. If you dont think i know anything, then fine.

But stop being a dick.

We should all be hete for the same reason

Dom,
I’ve been polite throughout this discussion and repeatedly said that we simply approach songwriting differently. I never said your writing was bad, and I acknowledged that different listeners connect with different styles.

But you keep insisting my lyrics are “pathetically bad,” that they “don’t work,” and now you’re making personal comments and insulting me. That’s not constructive feedback anymore!

At this point, I’m going to step away from the discussion because it’s no longer productive. Good luck finishing your song. Maybe someone else is willing to comment your 8 lines, I doubt it.