Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
No Rob, it doesn't work, its bad writing, whether I personally get it or not.

I understand what your trying to do, but that doesnt make it good

Theres not one clear cut line that says. How life is changing for the worse because of Ai.

Dom,
I understand you don’t think the song works, and that’s fine. Not every style or approach connects with everybody. You've probably never heard of The Rocky Horror Picture Show.

The connections and themes in the lyrics were intentional, and plenty of listeners understood what I was going for, even if you didn’t connect with it personally.

At the end of the day, songwriting is subjective.

Last edited by Rob B.; 15 minutes ago.