Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
No. You don't get it.

I was talking to a woman who owns a couple of art galleries the other day.
She is an artist herself.

She said she spends most of her time convincing artists that she represents to realize that what lights-them-up... doesn't light up anyone else. If they want their stuff to be viable, they have to take into account what other people will relate to.

So here you have depicted...

Some birthday party of person unknown and undefined in a location unknown and undefined.
Crumbs being vacuumed.
Something or other, about blue-and-gray.

Incohesive. No traction.

And then...

"empties the bucket then poof she be gone"

That line is ghastly. I stopped and read it twice to be certain that it was really that bad. Didn't you criticize something for "cultural appropriation" once?

Its describing the scene. Like you said nobody can relate, so we must show them.

Youre still hete for drama, you've never posted more than 3 songs, all of them suck.

When you were doing the music yourself, people at least gave points for trying.

I would stop worrying about my eork. Smybody who knows anything knows you cant help me,

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 3 hours ago.