I'm very satisfied with the whole song. I hope you like that "pretty please" line that I added. The break could be longer, the outro shorter, but all in all this is a beautiful song. I'd like to thank you and Gary for a great co-writing experience. I learned a lot. Next time I'll go to IKEA before I write a lyric to add more "furniture". I never heard that term before. These next couple of days I won't have much time available. Feel free to use my version for future tinkering. If you want me to send you an MP3 or something, let me know.

Last edited by Rob B.; 12/20/25 12:22 PM.