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Final verse/chorus: So I stay awake Just a little longer than I should But I do ‘Cause I know If I let myself drift back in I’ll find That place Where lonely ends Meet me here, same time, same dream<<<<<<<<<<<<< shouldn't there be something that rymes with this?
The song starts with: - awake / restlessness - being awake too late - waiting / longing
The final verse could end with: - choosing to drift back in - accepting the dream - reframes sleep as hope, not escape<<<<<<<<<<<<good point
And why would she want to stay awake longer than she should... she WANTS to go to sleep.
maybe we're missing the "meet me here". part...........it's a gentle melody, but she's a little frustrated that he doesn't show up every day so she's asking for an appointment.......
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