Kay-lynn,
we've been sending stuff back and fourth. Where are we currently regarding the lyrics and the structure. Have you decided whether you want a dedicated chorus or just verses that end with a hook line and a bridge for variation. More furniture or not? I find it hard to give you more input without knowing the structure of the lyrics. Sorry, I have to admit that I'm a bit lost at the moment. Can you post a version of the lyrics we should use to continue reshaping this one?