Dom feels I overstepped by adding lines to his idea. That wasn’t my intention. I thought he was inviting collaboration when he posted it, and I was simply trying to help develop the lyric.
Since that clearly wasn’t what he wanted, I’ve removed the lines I posted. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
Just to be clear, I never intended to claim ownership of his idea — only to contribute in the collaborative spirit this forum often encourages.

Last edited by Rob B.; 03/16/26 11:01 AM.