Here's the re-Structure form I suggest, and the changes.

"Sleeping With Ghosts" copyright 12/2/2017 by Rich Pirone

I drove back through my hometown,
back to a life that’s vanished and gone.
I'm stuck knee deep in a mem-o-ry!
I thought had moved on.

I can see it as clear as day!
It rushes in when I close my eyes!
All my old haunts are boarded up,
faint whispers lost to time!

Chorus:
I'm homesick for a time and place,
that's no longer there.
I see the one I miss the most!
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.

Fam’ly and friends who have passed on,
roam streets I used to tramp til dawn,
My hallowed nights of misspent youth;
I'm the one they left their mark on!

Chorus:
I'm homesick for a time and place,
that's no longer there.
I see the one I miss the most!
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.

Bridge:
I turn down a familiar street,
to an old flame’s house.
I don’t know what I hoped to find,
Thinkin’ I could fix the past somehow,
And make it work out right this time!

Chorus:
I'm homesick for a time and place,
that's no longer there.
I see the one I miss the most!
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.
I'm Sleeping With Ghosts.


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