This is brand spanking new lyric. Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated.

Sleeping With Ghosts

I dreamed I drove back to my hometown
Back to a life that’s vanished and gone
Stuck knee deep in a mem’ry
That I thought had moved on

But I can see it as clear as day
It rushes in when I close my eyes
All the old haunts are boarded up
Faint whispers lost to time

Chorus:
I’m sleeping with ghosts
More than a little homesick
For a time and place
That no longer exists
I spend my nights sleeping with ghosts

Fam’ly and friends who’ve left or passed on
Roam the streets I used to tramp til dawn
Through hallowed nights of misspent youth
That leave their mark on you

Bridge:
Turned down a familiar street
To an old flame’s house
Don’t know what I was hopin’ to find
Thinkin’ maybe I could fix the past somehow
And make it work out right this time

Chorus:
I’m sleeping with ghosts
More than a little homesick
For a time and place
That no longer exists
I spend my nights sleeping with ghosts


Rich Pirone
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