Gary,
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love what you did with my lyrics. By the time you responded I had already run my lyrics through Suno. I was pretty satisfied with the results. Now I just ran your version though Suno and I love this one as well. The more I hear it, the more I like it. I think yours has a higher commercial value because less is more. It’s easier to remember your lines because there are less lines and you repeated the pre-chorus. The shorter chorus works very well. Here are the two versions. Feel free to comment them.

Robert’s original version:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14899715


Gary’s modified version:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14900497

Gary, mega-thanks!

All the best - Robert