The critique that I gave you was factual and stated in civil terms. (below)
If you can't take the heat.....

Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
I am not sure that I see the point of the song.

I get the combination of phrases, though I doubt the majority of people would.

The 1st vignette in the song seems to be about a wedding that did not go well. Dad wrecked it.
The 2nd vignette is about a woman left out of her father's will
Then the singer mentions the person that they were singing the song to.. found and lost ...at the end of the song.

I guess that the song is about bad things that can happen over a long hot summer, but these vignettes about "indian givers" don't have any real glue that compellingly holds them together. I'm left wondering what the binding common denominators are and "takeaway" is.

Stated another way...what is the point of the song?

As for the AI generated music in this song (robots), it seems overly choppy and rushed. Feels synthetic and not human to me.



Ah, this explains the song.
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
I came up with title a and wanted to see if i could make song out if it.

Title may have be a little obscure and contrived to spawn a song.

Food for thought.

https://soundcloud.com/sunset-poet-of-texas