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You can hear it in the sound, so get up on your feet
I got no time to be, got enough of playing safe
The rain beats on my skin
Sad memories return
(Chorus)
But I'll Keep keeping It Cool!
Breezing along!
I'll sing a song or two!
Keeping It Cool!
I think you need the (But ) , its the drama then the answers with but
Have fun on stage Thanks bennash. Like that chorus change suggestion...adds definite bounce, with the T (but) and alliteration Ka,ka, T cooo...excellent. Thanks also for the verse suggestion...heavier thematic, power to it too, rich poetic. Bill
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