I enjoyed the song. Has a bit of a Springsteen vibe to it, although his voice is a bit thinner than the Boss's (isn't everyone's).

I think what stops it from being great is that there is no unifying theme to the lyric, it's a lot of disparate images that don't lead anywhere, although it's a fun journey, especially as my daughter lives a stone's throw from some of the places mentioned. My favorite lines are...
Meet me tonight by the station
Meet me in Washington Square
We'll drink wine and dance on the moonlight
And I'll hold you in the air

Great lines, even if they have nothing to do with most of the song. The choice of "on" instead of "in" is inspired.

It's quite long, and I was longing for a new instrument to appear, only to be a bit disappointed by the slightly jarring harmonica.

Thanks for sharing the video.